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TECHNIQUE & EXECUTION:
Great stocks chosen! Love how you made the forest background blurred and focus on the building. But i think i see the floor also blurred when it should be focused, i don´t know if its just my computer
Things i would change: The focus or attraction in the THUMB of your work is the lamp, i think a stronger color using the overlay tool would make it more interesting. And with this, adding stronger colors on her dress, face, hands and in the wolf too.
The wolf looks a bit out of the composition, it needs a overall shadow and the orange highlights on the fur in his head. I would remove the light on his left side with a smaller brush to hide it with the fur colors. the only light source for me should be the lamp. the rest should blend in with the night
She also needs shadows in the empty hand with some thin orange highlights to fit.
There is almost nothing to change, everything was well executed and as simple as it looks, is very well composed.
Hope my suggestions help you in your journey & remember critics are here to make our mistakes into masterpieces, not to make you feel bad or be mean
And for the watchers, remember to be original, and look but don´t touch. Don´t steal, don´t claim as your own and for the love of god, don´t sell images that don´t belong to you
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